JIKA AKU MENJADI, a kind of reality show makes me touched.
The freelance comes to small village, may be they are a university student, that has good quality in financial. They don’t know how difficult live is, effort to feel the hard life of someone else. They freelance has to stay in the small village around a week. Live in small house with all minimal equipments which provided.They have to do many activities for a week. At first day they help Maryamah to collect coffee seed, not harvesting, but collect it one by one, look them for under the coffee tree. After they make full the bucket whit coffee, they have to deliver it in storage field to get money. When evening comes, it’s time to take a rest, using plaited mad for sleeping, because they don’t have bed set. Morning is come, it’s time to spend 2nd day, begin with have breakfast with special menu tempe and sambel which made by freelance. After having breakfast the freelance ready to do next activity to help Maryamah keep an eye on the field. That it is not Maryamah’s field, she just keep an eye on it. Both Maryamah and the freelance, have to dig a hole to put in the seed, do fertilizing, and watering the tree. A hard day for both freelance and Maryamah has passed, and for few days later the freelance will do the same things during stay there. In short, it’s not easy for freelance to do those activities, because they never do it before.
- Does "freelance" consider as a proper term for the participant?
BalasHapus- Patria may begin to narrate the story by introducing the characters, say when you chose Maryamah episode as your scene.
- consider the punctuation
overall, not bad